Forbidden ledes: Thumb test
Today's tip: When you're tempted to begin your story with one of the Great Cliches, stop for a moment and put your thumb over the cliche. If the ensuing text makes just as much sense as it did before, go ahead and delete your precious lede. (Yes, even if it's just a brief.) Your readers will be none the wiser, but if they were, they'd thank you.
Labels: cliches, forbidden ledes
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