Friday, February 08, 2008

Night of the living pronouns

Although everyone knows it could happen, it doesn’t make it any less horrifying when it does.

Having conquered the lede, will the Trib be able to move on to the next step: a whole story without nouns? Stay tuned.


Blogger The Ridger, FCD said...

Oh my. I believe that second "it" should have been a "that". Which would still have left them without nouns, by the way.

1:56 PM, February 09, 2008  
Anonymous raYb said...

I do think The Ridger's right on that that. But, once it's fixed, this lede could be saved and used on dang near any second-day story about bad things happening where they could happen: anywhere.

3:12 PM, February 10, 2008  

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