An awful compound modifier
Right. So in case you were thinking your correspondent had gone completely troppo-descriptive, herewith a really bad hed that illustrates why we do need a punctuation mark that clarifies compound modification:
Governor's race ads invoke Hitler
Without some help, it's impossible to know what the writer* meant. Is race supposed to be acting as a noun -- "Ads in governor's race invoke Hitler" -- or as an attributive modifier -- "Governor's ads about race invoke Hitler" (which, since this is the AG's campaign for governor, is even worse)?
The quick cure, a hyphen between "governor's" and "race," illustrates why obsessive hyphenation is so much fun to complain about. "Governor's-race ads invoke Hitler" looks really, really dumb. Solution: Spend the extra space (which you have) and unstack the modifiers:
Ads in governor's race invoke Hitler
That way, at least, "governor's" isn't modifying "ads." Or use a less ambiguous attributive noun:
Virginia campaign ads invoke Hitler
Either way, stop thinking subscribers/customers/"consumers" (I'm really getting to hate that term) can read your mind. They can't.
* If the anonymous perp at cnn.com wants to confess, we'll see what we can do about some form of intercession. Intersession, of course, is somebody else's problem.
Governor's race ads invoke Hitler
Without some help, it's impossible to know what the writer* meant. Is race supposed to be acting as a noun -- "Ads in governor's race invoke Hitler" -- or as an attributive modifier -- "Governor's ads about race invoke Hitler" (which, since this is the AG's campaign for governor, is even worse)?
The quick cure, a hyphen between "governor's" and "race," illustrates why obsessive hyphenation is so much fun to complain about. "Governor's-race ads invoke Hitler" looks really, really dumb. Solution: Spend the extra space (which you have) and unstack the modifiers:
Ads in governor's race invoke Hitler
That way, at least, "governor's" isn't modifying "ads." Or use a less ambiguous attributive noun:
Virginia campaign ads invoke Hitler
Either way, stop thinking subscribers/customers/"consumers" (I'm really getting to hate that term) can read your mind. They can't.
* If the anonymous perp at cnn.com wants to confess, we'll see what we can do about some form of intercession. Intersession, of course, is somebody else's problem.
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