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Wednesday, September 12, 2007
Oh, the suspense
The perils of carelessly written bullet items:
Among the senators grilling Petraeus and Crocker were five presidential hopefuls, one of whom could inherit the war.
Analysis, 4A
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Come on. Aren't you going to tell us which one?
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